How to Cold Email for a Job: Templates That Actually Get Interviews

Elliot Thomas·6 min read

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A cold email to a hiring manager broken into a specific opener, a short pitch, and one ask.

Most jobs get filled through people, not portals. Cold emailing a hiring manager or team lead directly puts you in front of a human instead of an applicant tracking system, and it works far more often than people expect, because almost nobody does it. A good cold email can get you a conversation for a role that was never posted, or jump you past a queue of online applications.

This covers how to do it well: who to email, what to say, six templates you can adapt, and the mistakes that get you deleted. The principles are the same ones behind any good cold email, just pointed at starting a conversation about work.

The short version

  • Emailing a hiring manager directly beats the application portal, because you reach a person.
  • Lead with something specific about them or the company, never with your CV.
  • Keep it short, make one clear ask, and attach or link your CV rather than pasting it.
  • Follow up once or twice, politely; most replies come after the first email.
  • The same structure works whether or not a role is currently advertised.

Who to email, and how to find them

Skip the generic careers inbox. You want the person who’d actually manage you, or the recruiter who owns that team’s hiring. A team lead, a head of department, a founder at a smaller company. They’re the ones who can create a conversation, where careers@ is a black hole.

Finding them is usually straightforward: LinkedIn to identify the right person, then their work email, which often follows a predictable pattern at the company, or a tool that finds it. Getting the right human is half the battle, the same way a good target list is half the battle in sales outreach.

The structure

A cold email for a job is short and has three jobs: prove you’re worth a reply, show you’d be useful, and make one easy ask.

  1. A specific opener. Something about them, the team or the company, not about you. It shows you’ve done your homework and aren’t blasting fifty companies.
  2. A tight pitch. Two or three lines on why you’d add value, ideally tied to something the company is doing. Outcomes, not your whole CV.
  3. One clear ask. A short call, or whether they’re open to applications. Easy to say yes to.

Link your CV rather than pasting it in, and keep the whole thing under 150 words. They’ll read a short email now; a long one gets “later”, which means never.

Six templates you can adapt

Swap the bracketed bits for real detail. Don’t send them word for word, the specificity is what makes them work.

1. Role is advertised

Subject: re: the [role] role

Hi [first_name],

I saw [company] is hiring a [role]. I’ve spent the last [X] years doing exactly this at [previous_company], where I [specific result].

I’ve applied through the site, but I wanted to reach out directly, your [specific company thing] is the kind of work I’d love to be part of.

Would you be open to a quick chat? Happy to work around your week.

2. No role advertised

Subject: [team] at [company]

Hi [first_name],

I know you might not be hiring right now, but I’ve been following [company]’s [specific thing] and had to reach out.

I’m a [your role] with a track record of [specific result], and I think I could help with [specific challenge they likely have].

If there’s ever a fit, I’d love to talk. No worries at all if not.

3. Referral or shared connection

Subject: [mutual_name] suggested I reach out

Hi [first_name],

[mutual_name] mentioned you’re building out the [team] team and thought we should connect.

I [one line on what you do and a result]. [company]’s work on [specific thing] really caught my eye.

Would 15 minutes next week work?

4. Career switcher

Subject: making the move into [field]

Hi [first_name],

I’m moving into [field] from [previous field], and [company] is exactly the kind of place I want to do it.

My background in [previous field] gave me [transferable strength], and I’ve been [proof you’re serious: a course, project, side work].

Could I ask you a couple of questions about how you got into it? Even 10 minutes would mean a lot.

5. New graduate

Subject: [course] grad, big fan of [company]

Hi [first_name],

I just finished [course] at [university], and I’ve been following [company]’s [specific thing] for a while.

During my degree I [specific, relevant project or result], and I’d love to bring that to a team like yours.

Are you open to junior applications at the moment? Happy to send my CV across.

6. The short follow-up

Subject: re: [your original subject]

Hi [first_name],

Just floating this back to the top of your inbox in case it got buried. Totally understand if now’s not the time.

[One new line: a recent company update, or a specific thing you could help with.]

Either way, thanks for reading.

Following up

One unanswered email isn’t a no, it’s usually a “busy”. Send one polite follow-up after about a week, and maybe a second a week after that, then leave it. Add a sentence of new value each time rather than just nudging. The same follow-up principles that work in sales work here: short, spaced out, and never passive-aggressive about being ignored.

A few common questions

Does cold emailing for a job actually work? Yes, and better than most people expect, because so few candidates do it. Reaching a hiring manager directly gets you past the portal and in front of a person who can actually start a conversation, including about roles that were never advertised.

Who should I cold email about a job? The person who’d manage the role, or the recruiter for that team, not the generic careers inbox. A team lead, head of department, or founder at a smaller company can create a conversation that an application form can’t.

How long should a job cold email be? Short, under 150 words. A specific opener, two or three lines on why you’d add value, and one clear ask. Link your CV rather than pasting it, and leave them an easy way to say yes.

If you ever end up doing outreach at volume, in sales, recruiting or fundraising, the same craft is what a cold email sequencer automates. Cold emailing for a job is one of the smartest moves a job hunter can make, and almost nobody does it well. Target the right person, lead with something specific, make one easy ask, and follow up politely. For the wider craft behind it, see the complete cold emailing guide.

Elliot Thomas

Elliot Thomas

Co-founder, HotHawk

I'm Elliot, co-founder of HotHawk. A product guy at heart and a builder by nature, happiest when I'm making things people genuinely love to use. I'm based in a leafy little town in Surrey, just outside London.

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